untitled suicidal poem

[i_hate_the_world47]

Why cant i have a normal life

Why must i live by the knife

The thing that causes me my pain

Yet shows all i have to gain

 

Why i ask do i cry

Crimson tears fall from my sky

I am young but grew up quick

Depressed,troubled,take your pick

 

For i am all of the above

But all i yearn is someone's love

Someone who would care for me

But i have no one to set me free

 

My tears are red and burn inside

My enternal scars i can no longer hide

I want them to see my pain

Because this hurt overloads my brain

 

A depressed teen who sits in dark

Lifes cruel punishment has left its mark

And as she fades and becomes yesterday

Her soul is finally set free today

 

I wrote this poem about my life.Dont judge plz.

 

~Meagan~

[Paul-From-Oz]

You are years ahead of your age being able to express your feelings so clearly. I hope u find the person to replace the pain u feel necessary to absorb. Try to keep strong and whether u believe in a god or not, believe we each have a role to play in life and yours will become clearer in time.

Keep writing - u have a great talent.

 

 

[dpressedone89]

its a good poem i like it alot. your really clear when you describe how you feel. you have a lot of talent, don't let anyone or anything stop you from writing.keep up the good work.

 

stay strong

 

-sTiTcHeS

[jaiva]

You have a way with words and you use it for your advantage. I love the poem it has a lot of meaning and it shows your hurt. I hope that you can find someone who can make you at least understand what is going on and can help you find happiness. I'll be willing to help.

 

Jaiva

[i_hate_the_world47]

Thanx everyone.I wish i could find a place to put all my poetry though.I want it to be heard.If anyone knows where i can do this please tell me.

[Stinkweed]

Great poem. I've read a lot of your poems, and like other writters, you never cease to amaze me. It's really good. =D> Congratulations.

[ang3l2004]

Wonderful poem you expressed your feelings well