I am angry hurt and mad please read and reply

[ang3l2004]

How could you have done this how could you just walk away and lie,

All I wanted to do is love you be by your side but all I do is cry.

 

What gave you the right to say your not ready after everything we been through,

Why not just have stopped it if you knew that is what you were going to do.

 

Now I am angry and hurt and feel betrayed in my soul and heart,

You left me alone to pick up the pieces that you helped tear apart.

 

Mabe I was blind and you know I did everything I could,

Thought the same you would do for me I really thought u would.

 

You do not call to say hello or even to make sure if im alright,

But look at me doing everything to hold you with all of my might.

 

After all the time we spent together and even though I am not there,

I thought that mabe your love for me would somehow still prove that you do care.

 

But all I get is rejection no sign that I was ever there for you,

But even when you left me my love for you stayed true.

 

I cannot believe you are doing this I cannot believe this is real,

I cannot believe that you suddenly have no feelings now you do not feel?

 

I will never forget your family I will never forget the love we had,

I will never forget the good days I will never forget the bad.

 

If Only you know how much I loved you and how genuine my love was for you,How even when you were as dark as a storm I still seen the cloudy sky blue.

 

Why is it that you act like this when you told me all these things,

After all of this mess for you my heart still sings.

 

I am getting so sick of this drama and everything that goes with it,

I am stuck behind these walls trying to get out of this deep pit.

 

I am crying in anger and sadness and I am not sure what to do,

When all along after 2 d@m% years you told me you love me to.

 

If you think I am not good enough or that I was nothing but a waste,

Later in life you will see that this love was really a great taste.

 

Please dont think im being mean or disrespecting your made mind,

I just get so sick of this because you dont treat me very kind.

 

Look deep within your heart and think with your head,

That the next time you tell me you love me make sure you use actions instead. what do u think by

[1Adam12]

Very well written ang3l..you got a real talent for this stuff you know..you should write alot of these down and try to publish them on a poetry site online somewhere..

 

Phillip

[ang3l2004]

thankyou very much

[lunatic]

Wow what a great emotional peom Ang3l. I really enjoyed it and keep up the good work.

 

 

 

 

 

Hubman =D>

[i_hate_the_world47]

That poem was very well written.Keep up the good work.

 

Meagan

[jaiva]

Your poem was awesome. And it feels real. I read lots of poetry and a lot of it is just sawdust. Continue to tell your emotions through poetry because I'd like to read it.

 

Jaiva

[HaloDestroyer]

Hey!

 

I can really 'feel' this poem... The emotions drip from the screen, and seep into my soul...

 

It's a rich, well-balanced poem. The only thing I can think of that I don't like about it is the rhyme scheme.

 

But, that's a personal thing. Overall, this is a shining example of emotional poetry!

 

XxX-Ben-xXx

[ang3l2004]

thankyou all so much