dpressedone89 Posted June 13, 2004 Share Posted June 13, 2004 smile for today tomorro you could be gone you can never have too much life is only beyond help when its done everything is fixable nothing will stay broken long a truth to hold dear like a favorite song there is no such thing as an unfixable mistake things do get better life is what you make it will improve but in time it takes so fear not a man on this planet hold your head up if they bring you down in the grass slither snakes of deception life will always go on like the earth around the sun only when you have lived your lif can you say you have one ~NOTHING IS FOREVER EXCEPT LOVE~ things get better this is my happy inspirational poem hope everyone likes it oppinions Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted June 13, 2004 Author Share Posted June 13, 2004 hey im just curious how come no one posts on my poems when they arent depressing this ones a little up beat its been over three hours and no one has given an opinion? oppinions please? Link to comment
fosto Posted June 13, 2004 Share Posted June 13, 2004 Hey... well I'll be the first to say that you are a gerat poet and I'm sure you know it (see there's my poetic skills for ya). Anyways, justw anted to say, great job with your peom and keep up the amazing work!!! Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 14, 2004 Share Posted June 14, 2004 That's good, because I can see a positive side coming out of you, in it! Keep writing! ~Under~ Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 14, 2004 Share Posted June 14, 2004 It's great that you've been able to find the words to write such a postive poem. EmptySoul Link to comment
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