What would complete this?

[idontakre6203]

It's just a simple play on words. I'm not sure what I intend to tell here. Above all, I'm looking for a cleaner ending ha. Any Ideas friends? Should I expand or would I exhaust the concept?

 

These eyes they see the things I saw,

The things I see, these eyes, they saw.

The mind I own, thought's think it knows,

It thinks the thoughts I mind, you know,

If ever thinks these balls that hang,

Don't shoot your men a'midst a bang.

[blue_dahlia]

It's just a simple play on words. I'm not sure what I intend to tell here. Above all, I'm looking for a cleaner ending ha. Any Ideas friends? Should I expand or would I exhaust the concept?

 

These eyes they see the things I saw,

The things I see, these eyes, they saw.

The mind I own, thought's think it knows,

It thinks the thoughts I mind, you know,

If ever thinks these balls that hang,

Don't shoot your men a'midst a bang.

 

My ears they hear sounds amidst,

The sounds that fill my ears are solace.