nenez Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 ..….What your love means to me…… I wake up every day and see your face. I turn to you to find the place Between your neck and shoulder, Sweet with sleep. The bed is empty when you're not there. I smell your scent upon the air But, as light fades and twilight meets The day, you're mine. When cares and troubles hold me down, I look to you to smooth the frown From my face and worries Seem much less. I love your face with every working line That age and care have marked and mine Is much the same I know, But you're beautiful. Of all the places I could choose to be, I would choose to be with you beside me, In any time or place. You make me whole. There is too much for me to say, How much I love you and in what way. You make my life so good, So wonderful. So read these lines; smile if you must, For until I am made ash and dust, I will be, in all ways yours, If you'll be mine. Link to comment
Protex Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 Very impressive poem. Good work. Link to comment
michaeltinker Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 AWSOME REMINDS ME OF MY GIRLFRIEND I SEE YOU HAVE FOUND YOUR PHILOSPHERS STONE CONGRADULATIONS I HAVE AS WELL ONLY WITH NO DEGREE EXCEPT FOR AN ASSOCIATE, AND A GRANDMASTER. MUCH LOVE MICHAEL Link to comment
Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 I like it, are you going to hand it to her, I think she'll love it! Heb Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 hey i really liked your poem, it very inspiring and deffinitley shows what true beauty and possibly love holds, great work. kel Link to comment
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