forever yours

[Divine_Malice]

A sweet whisper,

two words and I am gone.

You lay your hand upon mine,

with one knee to the ground.

A question is asked,

My answer is "yes."

Tears being to fall,

I am forever yours.

 

A long lasting smile,

I stand in the mirror in a long white gown.

I walk down the aisle,

a smile accross your face.

A question is asked,

My answer is "I do."

Tears begin to fall,

I am forever yours.

 

A harsh long night,

I sit by your side.

The doctor walks in,

No hope in sight.

A question is asked,

My answer is "pull it."

Tears begin to fall,

(As I whisper) I am forever yours.

[hodgo]

im crying. thats amazing.

[Beoslasher]

beautifully written

The guy in me is fighting all those sappy sad/happy emotions ^_^

so that means your poem is very emotional and beautiful =P

[Divine_Malice]

Thank you. Yeah i think its one of my best pieces

[hodgo]

oh! i just read it again and it sent chills through me. i really love it. beautiful.