enigma07 Posted July 28, 2008 Share Posted July 28, 2008 I asked you to leave....Do you remember? I asked you to leave gently, on your tiptoes So the soft noise of your shoes moving away wouldn't deafen my ears... You left. Now, me, standing there still, with my fingers blocking my ears and in my head the old stories repeating themselves and my ears... Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted July 29, 2008 Share Posted July 29, 2008 Deeply felt here. Give us another? Link to comment
A World Away Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 I like it. It's almost like a poem of the subconscience. Link to comment
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