BYOB Posted April 26, 2008 Share Posted April 26, 2008 I made this poem when I was 18. All I remember is that although it is very short, it is very profound. I am aware that it might not be very clear and easy to understand but it is full of details. It is also quite significative to me who knows its meaning. I also remember the intensity that I had put in this poem when I wrote it. So enjoy reading... LIFE’S MURDER Portrait of possessions Fills Paul of Protections Fading of old phases pulp up vivid pulses. crucible of his crimes Commits Perpetuity. cadence, calamity Cold Pair of Mimes Destined, done to whom ? portal; Discrepancy despair, disloyalty Pool of a selfish Doom Link to comment
midnightrambler Posted April 26, 2008 Share Posted April 26, 2008 I hope you got a good grade on that....well done Link to comment
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