markofjudas Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 God, oh god, why does my writing suck? Why I am Salieri stuck in a rut of pointless poetry, recycling garbage that couldn’t sate a high school mind? God, oh God, I have been forsaken. No, not by you, by ever miserable * * * * that walks the earth. I have been given the desire to succeed yet not an ounce of talent or time. Failure is not an option; it is a commandment, etched in stone to be placed upon an empty grave. Link to comment
Dako Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 Maybe being a Salieri isn't so bad. He was one of the finest musicians, composers and teachers of his era. Link to comment
Pocket Rocket Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 Your writing doesn't suck, I actually liked this and I tend to be pretty picky with my poetry Link to comment
Cimmie Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 Salieri was totally smeared in 'Amadeus'. That film was very unfair to him. Link to comment
JadedStar Posted October 20, 2007 Share Posted October 20, 2007 Salieri was totally smeared in 'Amadeus'. That film was very unfair to him. I agree. it was a great movie but it did put salieri in a horrible light that wasn't fair. But it was very loosely based on reality. Link to comment
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