Another Poem

[sarey]

Staring,

breathing,

planning,

thinking.

 

I'm living life,

living till I die,

death coming soon,

this time, I lose.

 

Biting,

chewing,

my nails,

scratching,

itching,

the scars that'll never heal.

 

Soul and heart,

both broken,

tears shredding,

mind shattering,

I'm fading away.

 

Grabbing the rope,

snatching the pills,

finding the blade,

and everything that kills.

 

Swollowing the pills,

tightening the rope,

slicing my wrists,

with the metal.

 

The blood drips,

my eyes bloodshot,

it didn't take so long,

I lie on the floor,

and I'm gone,

forever,

and ever.

 

I'm gone now,

the burden disappeared,

you can all lead a better life now,

not a person to shred a tear,

smiles all around,

when my death is found.

[sarey]

Thanks Stu, I appreciate the offer.

[niczeegs]

That was amazing.

 

Although we may all not admit it, but everyone feels this way sometimes.

[dnttellmelies]

i have to tell you that there is no way that one person hasn't felt this desperate sometimes. i will say it is a constant battle in my head over this very thing and i don't voice my feelings as often as i should. thank you for saying what i could and cannot.

-ash

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

That was really deep and wonderful. Your really good at expressing your feelings in poetry. You have a great talent you really do.