bubbles Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 Every night before I sleep There is one prayer I say I ask God to make him like me And this is what I pray Dear God up above I know that you're there And every time I pray to you I know that you care Why must my best friend like him? Why can't she understand? I dream about him every night She gets every guy on demand She pulls him in Then spits him out This isn't what love Is all about She gets me mad When she smiles at him And then I realize If hit the brim It not a fun Place to be And I only wish He would see That I've liked him for so long And I only wish he knew A little more about me What more can I do For him or for me For me or for him It seems as if The lights are dim They get darker every day When he notices her And every time I see it My world is a blur Some say I'm jealous Some say I'm obsessed Others say I'm messed up Yet some say I'm blessed But it doesn't really matter Because I don't listen any ways And when Tuesday is over I'm counting down the days Until next week For me to look in to his eyes My pulse starts to race And that's no surprise For when I see him My gray skies turn blue It makes me want to see him Even though my troubles are through My heart is happy When he starts to laugh Thought it's usually to her So my feelings are half When ever I'm sad I just say his name And when I think about love I know its no game I know what I feel I know who I am And as I'm writing My thoughts begin to cram There is so much I want to say That it takes me over A couple days To finish a poem About what I feel And after I'm done I know this is real Theirs never been a person Who has helped me this much It just as if he Have the lucky touch When ever I see him Talk to him on the phone There is a feeling inside That says I'm not alone Sometime when I write The feelings are too strong And you can tell this Because my poems are so long This way I feel in side Needs a special key Which I thought had sunken Deep in the sea Yet now it's around his neck Tied with a string And when he stole my heart The key he did bring It kind of funny I've never felt this way before And even thought other guys like me I am going to shut the door Too keep them out So I can see him I feel as if I Am holding to every limb Can't he understand? He was the one Who inspired me to write This is how I begun He gave me a reason That actually made scene And now I fell like my heart Is guarded my a fence No one can hurt it Not even mean friends For all I do it think about him And my sadness mends As if by magic But by love A sudden sign From up above To love him like my brother To cherish him like my friend To take him in forever So that my love won't bend To care for him like my own child To hope for his success To tend to his every need This is very hard to express But becasue this is abotu him Someone thats changed my life For he is the one Who made me want to strive For my education For his love For a prayer with god Who lives up above Not literly But yet honestly too If their wasn't him I don't know what I'd do Link to comment
Iwanthim Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 Omg thanks soo good and inspiration. I actually wish i could write poems very good Link to comment
just_smile Posted October 8, 2003 Share Posted October 8, 2003 hey =D> wow thats a great poem, it was very heartfelt and deep, it became deeper as the poem progressed i believe. i really liked it, so keep writing anyway thanks for sharing this with us ~LJ =; Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted October 9, 2003 Share Posted October 9, 2003 man that was long yet impressive, usually i get bored but i so wanted to listen to the end of yours. anyway great work, and like just_smile did, you deserve the applauds. loved it ... lol kel Link to comment
sphinx999 Posted October 10, 2003 Share Posted October 10, 2003 Wow thats an amazing poem, you really managed to get all the emotions in there, you should think about doing it professionally. I'm honestly not being sarcastic I really enjoyed it. Sphinx999 xxx Link to comment
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