Hey everyone,
This is my first post here. I wrote this poem and I want to know what people think of it. Is it good, what needs work, that sort of stuff.
What is the purpose in life
Am I here to please everyone
Do I have a certain track to follow
What does it want with me
I work so hard to please people
Yet no matter what I do it is never good enough
No one is ever happy with me
They always want more
What can I do to make you see
I try my best to please you
Why wont you believe me
Or see me how I want you to
I hate my life so much
I just want it to end
Take my life and finish it
Relieve me from this prison
I'm sorry for hurting you
But I promise that I will never
Hurt you again. And I promise that
You will never see me again
For tonight I must end my life
I must break free from this prison
And live my life my way
I need to do things my way
So now I say goodbye to you
I will carry you in my heart wherever I go
I love you and will always remember you
Goodbye my friend. Remember me always
Thanks for the help,