Waiting4forever Posted May 9, 2007 Share Posted May 9, 2007 I'm the girl with the longing eyes Who is wating patiently You're the lost one Who is making her way back To where I am. I'm the girl with the lonely eyes Who watches you stumble and fall When you're so close. I'm the girl with the hopeful eyes Who watches you get closer I'm the girl with the relieved eyes Who grabs a hold of you I'm the girl with the loving eyes Who embraces you, never wanting to ever let go again. Link to comment
Gus Almighty Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 Thats a great poem, it should have gotten alot of good remarks for its simplicity yet great depth. Link to comment
spunkmaster Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 WOW...amazing job. I can really relate to this. Link to comment
maybetomorrow Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 It feels as though you took a piece of my mind and wrote it out. wow. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 23, 2007 Share Posted May 23, 2007 I agree its really good Your very talented. Link to comment
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