neva_black_n_white Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 late nights and creeping floor boards i see a crack that holds no barriers a door open and within sight what story will this tell tonight you hold your hands out, signal me in grasp onto my fingerips, im drawn within tip toe gently, dont set of a stir hopefully people, dont grasp that im here im lead through the door way, into the room lit with vibrant lights, a taste of elatedness through - out of the darkness and into the light caressing the surface, no fright tonight keeping eyes fixated, surroundings so clear smiling faces are cherished, celebrated and dear takes in the fixtures through each of the senses prey the night continues, taste of life never ending wont you leave the door open for me tonight? Link to comment
Boughs Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 Very nice. I loved it. I love those nights. Link to comment
studio781 Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 What do you feel this poem is about? Link to comment
studio781 Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 The reason I ask is I told a man that I was in love with that my dream night with him would be for him to leave his door open, I would come in and get into bed with him and make love with him. I never heard from him after I said that. I scared him away. Link to comment
Boughs Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 For me, I take the nights where I snuck into her house. She cracked open the door so i could sneak in. She slowly grabbed me and pulled me into bed. And then a "taste of life never ending" feeling runs through. This was back in High School of course. Link to comment
Boughs Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 The reason I ask is I told a man that I was in love with that my dream night with him would be for him to leave his door open, I would come in and get into bed with him and make love with him. I never heard from him after I said that. I scared him away. Maybe being told that would turn me off... but saying "come down, i'll leave my door open" would be sexy... a command is better than a suggestion in my eyes. Link to comment
TheFallenShadow Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 Or is it that she wishes for the door of the heart be opened to her once again...that in all things we all deserve a second chance. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted March 6, 2007 Author Share Posted March 6, 2007 is a hope of freedom, a new door opening and and end to a situation that i resent Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted March 6, 2007 Author Share Posted March 6, 2007 thankyou for all the responces its nice to see all the interpretations neva Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 6, 2007 Share Posted March 6, 2007 Well i just found it simply beautiful Neva. Its good to see another poem from you, we haven't in a while. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted March 8, 2007 Author Share Posted March 8, 2007 thanks. thats really kind. i havent been on for a while.. i suppose its because i feel like i dont need to (not in a selfish way..but i think you get what i mean). just felt like i needed to say a few things, so i came back Link to comment
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