DeviantOne Posted September 28, 2006 Share Posted September 28, 2006 She ran up the stairs to her release. She wants all the screaming voices to cease. Standing on the edge, hoping she can fly. She spreads her arms and say's goodbye. She jumped, she flew, and then she fell. She was tired of the world she knew all too well. She watched all her hopes fade to black. She knows all too well she won't be back... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRock Posted September 28, 2006 Share Posted September 28, 2006 great work. you have talent! keep the hope alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 29, 2006 Share Posted September 29, 2006 wow, very moving, I love the say it went so well together, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valenski Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 She won't be back because she when splat!!!! on the pavement. I like it much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 Maybe she went SPLAT..... or she was tired of the world she created that she chose to create another world.... make the changes in her life that would make a difference. Like the poem. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrokenBlackWolf Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 i really like it, and if anyone want to see any of my poems, PM me(i dont want to just post them) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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