digital fiction Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 Not my favourite poem but I thought I'd put it up anyway... Ive been to hell and back Fought through out my time The hatred of destructions path Has yet to seize a shine I walk the sacred land Where one fears tomorrow I walk the ashfault grounds Where one breathes sorrow 'N every open secret Left amongst the bold Leaves me one more tear To raise and to hold Yet - To get this far And to do so, so much Leaves me many, many dreams I may never even touch! Despite the fact I've lost my soul I have taken such a mighty toll Im happy here; alike the rest 'Cause Im-a living in hatreds crest Link to comment
just_smile Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 wow i really liked your poem, it was really deep and quite interesting, i particularly liked this bit: I walk the sacred land Where one fears tomorrow I walk the ashfault grounds Where one breathes sorrow keep writing ~LJ =; Link to comment
digital fiction Posted January 20, 2005 Author Share Posted January 20, 2005 Thanks LJ! I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Link to comment
in_the_mirror Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 i really love your poems, they are always entertaining to read, can't wait for your next one. and if its not to much to ask i would like to know what "inspires" you, for lack of a better word. Link to comment
digital fiction Posted January 21, 2005 Author Share Posted January 21, 2005 Thanks Kbelles and In_The_Mirror, I dont know what inspires me exactly. Loads of differant things going on around me. Friends and family or the world for instance. Sometimes its just said and done, it may not be my favourite but it says more, you know. Anyway thanks again. Link to comment
From_Now_On Posted February 1, 2005 Share Posted February 1, 2005 You always write magnificent poems kiddo. I love you! -ur sis- Link to comment
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