untitled...read it?

[EmptySoul]

Reading over my poem, I can definitly see that most people beside the one who I wrote it about will not understand most of this. Maybe you can relate though, so please take the time to read...

 

 

I can see you in the darkness

Just a memory of those forgotten things

But I remember how it felt

Yeah, I remember how it felt...

 

You're not here anymore

But I remember the way I loved you

I remember the way it went

Sometimes holding hands

Don't you remember the feeling?

Walking in the dark

Eating burnt bacon

Listening to oldies, and Linkin Park.

 

I can see you in the sunlight

Just a shining of the past

But I remember what we said

Yeah, I remember what we said...

 

I don't know when you'll find this

But I love you, for all of time

That's what the paper said

And the notebook filled with

Tweet and Moo

It was all pointless, I see now

But it didn't matter then.

And I remember what we did

Wasting money at the mall

You wouldn't eat a thing

at the Olive Garden

And those converses,

well you got them cheaper

than mine

I remember all the times,

All the times I think we had

 

I had the chance to kiss you

But it was wasted

Didn't move fast enough

With trying something new

I know it would've been amazing-

It would've been with you.

 

There's no point to anything

But I'm writing anyway

Just like, when I get your address

I'm sending that letter, in the mail

I guess some part of me remembers

Well, all of me remembers

How I loved you

How I love you.

 

And I hope you find your happiness.

 

Empty

[lostlove]

yes...i can relate to it...not the specific references in it, of course, but...yes...i can very much relate. with me it was a guy who i never went out with, but...god i loved him. i still do. and i always will regret not ever grasping the chance to tell him how i really felt. i didn't even know then how i really felt. but yeah...i guess the parts of this poem that i relate to are the parts about regreting lost love. hey, look at my screen name. oh, the irony. not. but yeah, it's good. especially for something not made for a public audience. i say you let him see it. but that's just me.

[EmptySoul]

*Smiles* It's to a she. Let the 'oh my god's begin.

 

Empty

[lostlove]

sorry, i guess i jumped to a conclusion...then i think that you should let her see it. good luck!

[under_the_pressure]

She's seen it, it made her cry. Brought back so many memories. The burnt bacon, and not eating anything at Olive Garden. How she misses you and loves you.

 

It's beautiful.

 

under*