troublegal05 Posted December 8, 2004 Share Posted December 8, 2004 The beggar "Damned to life" he said to me Drink of life he offered me I dare to seek for one so meek shall humble to the Lord. "Pity a tale" he wailed to me "endless in fails" he begged of me, for one so grimace with grief shall end up so meager and weak A seekers reply: "Back to dark" I said to thee "prayer of hearts" I begged of he take these souls away from me pure my heart for better skies and end me of these bitter lies. Link to comment
in_the_mirror Posted December 8, 2004 Share Posted December 8, 2004 i really like your poem, its put together well, it makes you think, about like everything, but nothing at the same time. if that even makes sense. Link to comment
troublegal05 Posted December 9, 2004 Author Share Posted December 9, 2004 thanx for your reply in_the_mirror; More thoughts on my poem from anyone would be greatly appreciated...thanx 8) Link to comment
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