mr-holly Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 hi! this is my first post here... i wrote a story about a twen-boy who loves a teen-girl... it's here: link removed just write your opinions about the story and the characters into the guestbook (under 'comments') thanks!! Link to comment
avman Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 This is a very good story mr-holly. You have a nice writing style. Link to comment
mr-holly Posted December 2, 2004 Author Share Posted December 2, 2004 thanks avman... could you write a comment into the guestbook? what do you think about the behaviour of the boy and the girl? you might guess why i'm asking this... Link to comment
San123 Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 That was a good story, I liked it! Link to comment
mr-holly Posted December 3, 2004 Author Share Posted December 3, 2004 glad you liked the story please also write your opinion under 'comments' at the website. thanks! Link to comment
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