PammyFoo Posted November 12, 2004 Share Posted November 12, 2004 Slithering slowly, hissing and spitting spraying murderous invisible venom. Airbourne disease firing, forcing on deaf ears lies. Slide off the slimy scales Securing the sinners swift bombardment. The lies. The lies. Rain down as the innocent cries wail and flail. Until the skulking shadow slowly devours. Stop! Listen...... Link to comment
Delaurence23 Posted November 12, 2004 Share Posted November 12, 2004 thats an awesome poem dont wanna sound sexist but dont hear many chicks write about that kinda stuff. It is a really deep poem and i think its gotta really good sounsd that describes great imagery keep writing.. Link to comment
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