crizlee Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 Where is the ride that will set me free Its way ahead of me living While I sit here with nothing to forsee Where are the moments I want to live Something too far for my grasp Something has got to effin give I stand outside screaming, "Why why why?!" Why does it happen to me Why does it make me want to just die I stand by myself in the darkness With no other clear path With those thoughts of times I'll miss Oh please tell me how shall i pay Show me whats there to live for Cause i want to catch that ride someday Shattered dreams Broken wings Fading beams Failure swings While i feel the karma god's wrath I swear its all my fault again I swear its my bad karma again And I'm just gonna have to live with it again Link to comment
crizlee Posted October 23, 2004 Author Share Posted October 23, 2004 this poem basically summarizes this: the girl that has been flirting with me and leading me on for 2 weeks declined my invite to homecoming. my truck is wrecked and i almost died. i told my parents im not a jehovahs witness, and now they dont treat me like a son anymore. today i told my mom, "hi how was your day?" she replied, "idiot." my friend said she would pick me up and take me to homecoming along with her friends. she never called me and picked me up. i asked the other girl who lead me on if she could atleast drop me off at my homecoming, she was at her football game. my parents are threatening to not let me go to college. they are threatening to take me out of public school. they are threatening to take my truck away. i havent had any fun time for 7 weeks now. all study and work. my church friends wont talk to me because of how i believe, im "bad influence" i just got a 71 in AP economics on my report card today. ive never had a girlfriend. ive hardly any friends at school because of the isolation this religion has forced upon me. Link to comment
Serendipity1607307077 Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 That's a beautiful poem, very soulful. Well done... Sorry to hear the reasoning behind it though... Link to comment
Delaurence23 Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 it was an awesome poem i know all the feelings you express it includes all my feelings the best thing about poetry is when someone can relate to you this is one of those times... Link to comment
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