Smile With the Rain

[ForAnother]

Its been raining here!!! haven't seen rain in 2 months since home. Thought I'd write some remembrance. Hope you like it.

 

Smile With the Rain

Its been a while

It hasn't rained in my presense

In some time.

Drop

Drop

Exploding with splashes,

Splash!

 

They step

And say "crap!"

But when I step,

I look down at my wet foot

My soaked pant leg

And smile.

It feels like home.

It feels like the days that were my worst,

And for some reason

I can smile now.

I've been at the bottom of this puddle

And it has yet to see the bottom of me.

 

It rains a little harder.

I take off my hood

To let my hair understand what the rest of me feels.

Look up

Eyes closed

Tongue out

And my thirst is quenched.

My burning tired eyes

Heal from the chill of the water.

As I walk inside,

Wet

And tired,

I tell myself

That today,

Is a great day.

 

ForAnother

[kungfumaster]

That poem kicks you know what Foranother -

I've never heard anyone express the happy

feeling I get when it rains as you did. Wow.

Vivid imagery, subtle emotions, and great

feelings.

 

*Applause goes here*

[under_the_pressure]

I don't know what to say...

...I don't want to just put 'great poem' because it was so much more than that. I really liked it. Hmm...I love your writings and this one is..miraculous. I guess it's because most people really just don't like rain and I love it and can't ever describe it and you hit it. Great job.

 

under*

[ForAnother]

Thank you both. I appreciate it very much. I just looked at it and the beginning is a bit choppy.

 

If you guys find any choppiness or anything, just lemme know, I would like to improve like everyone else out there.

 

ForAnother

[Delaurence23]

great annomanpia (how ever you spell that)

the noises add to a great affect

its make your poem really intriguing