Protex Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Two Two bodies, two souls. Entwined in a passionate bliss, breathing, whisperous breaths. Two beings, two shadows. Interwoven in a heated desire sweating, drops of intensity. Two lives, two worlds. Unified as one euphoric being tasting, the flavour of love . Two people, you and I. Twisted up as secret creatures, perfection, belonging to each other. Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Wow that's amazing. This poem is very deep. I hope everything works out for you, because you deserve the best. Keep writing, it amazes me how the other day I saw your first poem and it's like you've been writing for years. You are a terrific writer. Keep it up. best of luck, under* Link to comment
Protex Posted September 30, 2004 Author Share Posted September 30, 2004 Thank you both, very much. Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 that was awesome! great work. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 that was a wonderful poem keep up the writing you are very talented Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 Great job. I love it. Empty Link to comment
Billybob Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 Finally some good poetry on this board! Link to comment
Gauchori Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 lol Finally? By the way... very nice! Link to comment
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