hardcore Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 rain come's falling down accross my face. as i stand alone in this forsaken place. like a cold artic wind blowing. chill's my bone's to where ther is no feeling. broken like so few befor. tron like a blad of grass beneath the reaper's grasp. cut down and cast aside. like it was for told. with a blacken sky over thy head . shimmering ligth's dacne just above my head. time is lost to all who seek. time is lost for all to speek. some where over this black rainbow. the other side of me. burned beond recoinessen. darkend bye the sweet word's that you speek to me. once fueled bye your hate once fueled by the only love for me. as i spill my gut's on to the floor like a red river of instesines. filled with faty meat. rage i can help but to say. this is thy name is it not feel me deep with in thy own heart . filling thy mind and thy heart. like a fire i will come and take all or nothing from thy hand. i am the reaper of the blad's. you are but a stalk of wheat. hope you all like this one lol just me stoppinmg bye with a new one lol\ need's work i know. hardcore 8) Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 Good poem hardcore. Glad you stopped by. under* Link to comment
CarterJonas Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 good poem, keep up the good work Link to comment
troublegal05 Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 WOW i can really relate to what you were saying.......I also love to write poetry and I thought what you wrote was great. you should think about publishing it.. Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 24, 2004 Author Share Posted September 24, 2004 some pepole take what i say to bad don't know why they just think it's about something it's not don't know why but for some unknow resin i will be kicked off aging is there anything about this POEM that you find unreal i am a realist this is real life is hard time heal's most wond's but some it can not. this is the meaning behind this POEM nothing else but do what ever i don't think realizem should be cast aside just becuse it's not cute and fuzzy hardcore Link to comment
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