Picture

[dpressedone89]

I'll draw you a picture

of blood sweat and tears

a picture of my pain

on my arm i've ben drawing for years

 

can you see it in my eyes

how about my arm

why break this habit

it does you no harm

 

you dont see my pain

so you assume it doesnt exist

you dont see it in my eyes

so i draw it on my wrist

 

-sTiTcHeS what do ya'll think of this one?

-sTiTcHeS ok i am feeling better what do ya'll think of that one?

[Rage]

I really like the poem, especially the first paragraph

[nothingontheinside]

i love you Stitches!!!

that was awesome.

you are my hero... thanks for still being alive

[i_hate_the_world47]

Awesome poem.You will be a great poet some day.

 

~Meagan~

[black_magic]

I really liked your poem, i thought it was creative and i thought you used a good message and imagery to put your point accross, great poem though!

 

black magic

[ComputerGuy]

That was a real good poem, it was written really well and gets the message you're trying to say accross effectively. Good job.

[just_smile]

hey

i really liked your poem, i agree with Rage, i thought the first stanza was really great, but i also like the very last stanza too, i think you portayed simply how ignorant people are towards others pain.

 

~LJ =;

[Stinkweed]

That's really good. You're a very good writer. Great job =D>.

[under_the_pressure]

Wow, that poem was great. Very nice job!

 

hugs*

 

*under*