Dream : please read and reply thanks

[ang3l2004]

I had fallen asleep and was thinking of you,

We were sitting on a cloud the sky was blue.

 

It started to become dark and we were sitting on a star,

Mabe it is the one I wished on that you were not to far.

 

We looked into eachothers eyes and just sat next to the moon,

Becoming so close again I knew it was coming soon.

 

I started to drop and slowly fall from the sky,

I was falling all alone I began to cry.

 

As I am looking up you are smiling from above,

I started to fall faster,faster then I fell in love.

 

I reached out for your hand as im falling and in tears,

I begin to see our memories of our 2 years.

 

You did not hold your hand out to save me from this fall,

The bottom was coming soon and I tryed after all.

 

As I hit the bottom I had no clue what to do,

I was looking all around but did not see you.

 

I felt so broken and hurt that I began to weep,

Then I hear a knock at my door that woke me from my sleep.

 

As I woke up and looked around to notice this was a dream,

I realize that in life nothing is ever what it may seem. By

 

tell me what you think ?

[boredguy]

that was a truly beautiful poem. keep it up!

[i_hate_the_world47]

All of your poetry is very meaningful.And this one was no diffwerent.Keep up the writing

 

Meagan

[ang3l2004]

thankyou!!

[neva_black_n_white]

thats a great poem, its kind of putting things into perspective and almost making you see what you have to ensure that that person is there for when you fall because a friendship or relationship could be so strong. but anyway, i enjoy reading you poem, it was really good.

 

kel

[lunatic]

=D>

 

WOW I loved it Ang3l!!! Your so talented with your poetry. Please keep up your writing because it is so good.

 

 

 

Hubman 8)

[ang3l2004]

Thankyou so much!

[jaiva]

As I've said b4 I really like your poetry and its very insightful. Continue writing.

Jaiva

[ang3l2004]

thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!