dpressedone89 Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 why am i still her why do i feel this way why do you care why do i cry everyday why cant i handle life why cant i just fade away why cant i die why do i stay why does it hurt why do i care why do i care why do i care why am i alive why am i so confused why am broken why am i so used why wont i be happy why wont i smile why cant i be loved i will die in a little while you make me happy you make me crazy you make good you make me hazy you make me bad you make me live you make me take you make me give youve always been there through my ups and downs through my problems through my smiles and my frowns you stopped me from cutting you stopped me from regret thats why im alive thats why i havent died yet i dont care what people think i dont live for them i live for you i dont struggle for approval or love i love you for everything you do ok that was just coming out i couldnt stop it if i wanted to i dont even know why i feel this way but whatever so this is my poem its not like my other poem its just weird what do you all think? lots of input Link to comment
sisterlynch Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 It is sad and yet interesting at the same time. I would love to ask who the "you" is that you are referring to. The thing that I noticed was where you said that you cry everyday, you seem to need direction. Sometimes we feel this way when we are younger and going through some stressful time, I know that you will make it. All of us are here to listen and to help. I wish you peace Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 I thought it was very good. I really related to it. Because sometimes I think to myself...wouldn't it just be better if I wasn't here, nobody wants me here anyway. But...then there is that one guy I talk to everyday telling me how beautiful I am and that he is so happy to have found me. So when you refer to "you" which I think is a her I think of him. It was very well written. I'm here for you! ~Under~ Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted June 16, 2004 Author Share Posted June 16, 2004 thank you all i just had a lot of feelings i needed to get out im glad you enjoy my poems ill keep them coming. wow i think everyone feels like that sometimes any more opinions? please? Link to comment
romantic sweetheart Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 Hi. I relate so well to what you have written. I write poems all the time, asking why, how, when? I write to release, I write to stay alive. i was just thinking to day how the darkness makes the light seem so much more real. Being so close to death makes life inexpressibly real. Feeling pain is feeling alive. But one day we will heal... Here is a poem I have written recently, but I can't think of the last line, so maybe someone out there can help: I go where the dead things stay On gravestones and things wasted away In darkening skies, heavy and gray In mournful sighs that drift and sway Drift and sway in silent gloom Things long past that chill the room The dreadful past, so thick with doom Press me on to join them soon Everyday must hold some sorrow Everyday must fret over tomorrow But so still the dead, brows never furrow The silent land of death and sorrow I am what I will be in death I am the last and parting breath The quiet words and last respects ..............................at rest Link to comment
AllTheseFeelings Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 i can sooo relate to this. ur awsome and ur writing keeps us alive! Link to comment
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