Anyone care to proofread

[Applewhite]

Is anyone interested in proofreading/commenting on a cover letter for me?

[mgirl]

I'll do it.

[orchidrose]

Sure, PM me.

[Maroney555]

I love editing

[IntotheWild]

Sure. I have a good ear for what stands out and for what sounds exactly the same as the other 500 cover letters the employer will read.

[karvala]

Yeah, I'll have a look if you need a further opinion. I'm a ruthless critic, though.

[Applewhite]

Yeah, I'll have a look if you need a further opinion. I'm a ruthless critic, though.

 

Haha Karvala, thanks a lot. I would have probably benefited from your advice (I was hoping you would answer)

 

Unfortunately I submitted it today. Let's see if I get it.....

 

It's a rather complicated thing actually, and I might not get it BECAUSE I am too passionate about the position.

[karvala]

Haha Karvala, thanks a lot. I would have probably benefited from your advice (I was hoping you would answer)

 

Unfortunately I submitted it today. Let's see if I get it.....

 

It's a rather complicated thing actually, and I might not get it BECAUSE I am too passionate about the position.

 

Ah that's a shame; sorry about that. Too busy watching the UK election coverage.

 

Fingers crossed, especially if you feel passionately about it.