Odd Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Strong and silent, randomly violent. You try to hide it. But it's all in vain, you can't bleach out the stain. You try to refrain, and keep it out of your brain. But the pain is refreshed again, now your half crippled, holding a cane. When your talking about it, you change the topic. You do your best to stop it. Tell everybody to drop it. I just wrote this down off the top of my head, but now got writers block at almost midnight. Link to comment
Soul Searcher Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Are you asking us for idea's for a poem, or are you asking us for help???? Link to comment
jul-els Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Great lyric! I'm thinking either hip hop or punk... Link to comment
Soul Searcher Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Are you asking us for idea's for a poem, or are you asking us for help???? If it's ideas you want then how about.... Then when they do I sit at home and think it through and say to him I still love you Link to comment
Odd Posted January 9, 2010 Author Share Posted January 9, 2010 Thanks soul searcher I'll add that, it ends if off nicely, and somehow you got the general meaning of my poem too. Link to comment
WildOrkid884 Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 nice short poem i couldnt agree more. Read my poems n comment Link to comment
Soul Searcher Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 Your very welcome! Link to comment
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