bubbles Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 I'm over you. You see I can't go on like this. I filled up with this pain and clouded by memories of the past. At last, I see. I feel it fading. I can see it. Finally I can take your place. You feel I'm finding someone better. Take my advice. Leave me alone. You're a parasite man you don't get that I hate you. Leave me alone, I don't like you. But I can't seem to stop thinking of you. I feel my heart explodong in anger. Only when I start to think of you I know you're an insensitive idiotic *******. I hate you so much right now. Or do I really? You're a parasite man you don't get that I hate you. Leave me alone, I don't like you. But I can't seem to stop thinking of you. I've watched you cange through the days. Why did I love you It's all a big haze. I feel like I hate you but love you in different ways. You're a parasite man you don't get that I hate you. Leave me alone, I don't like you. But I can't seem to stop thinking of you. FOR JACK Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 Wow, that poem had such strong emotion in it, but thats what poetrys about, writing emotion down in some way, so good job Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 i liked it, shows a lot of power in that poem, and i thought it was great, it was better to see both sides and resulting conclusions, i liked it, kel Link to comment
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