volpe Posted May 9, 2008 Share Posted May 9, 2008 I want to scream sometimes to break it. When silence is like pressure from water depth. I can't say what I think because I "shouldn't" Tell what I am feeling deep down But I wonder, perhaps, even if they pretend not to have heard Maybe a word or two will filter in And maybe even if I never know Mutual understanding will grow And maybe even if I never know Somehow somewhere someone Will have not to experience the same as I Link to comment
NoPainNoGain Posted May 10, 2008 Share Posted May 10, 2008 thats awsome.... heres mine "Last year was a hard one, but life goes on Hold my head against the wall learnin right from wrong They say my ghetto intrumental, detrimental to kids As if they can't see the misery in which they live Blame me, for the outcome, ban my records - check it Don't have to bump this but please respect it I took a minus and now the hard times are behind us Turned into a plus, now they stuck livin blinded Hennesey got me feelin bad, time to stop drinkin Rollin, in my drop-top Jag, what's that cops thinkin? Sittin in my car, watch the stars and smoke I came a long way but still I got so far to go Dear mama, don't worry; I'ma watch for snares Tell Seykiwa, that I love her, but it's hard to take I got the letter that she sent me, and I cried for weeks This what came out when I tried to speak" Link to comment
volpe Posted May 11, 2008 Author Share Posted May 11, 2008 I love that poem! Hah! You an MC or something? Sounds like yay area to me... Lol... Link to comment
volpe Posted May 11, 2008 Author Share Posted May 11, 2008 that's 2pac, yeah... it's yay area, all the way! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 12, 2008 Share Posted May 12, 2008 I really liked this. Thankyou for sharing Link to comment
Brittanyxvx Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 It's a great write, love. Kudos. I hope you scream and the walls that boarder, are shattered. =] Link to comment
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