Another love sick poem

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Can you look me in the eye,

Can you tell me why,

Can you fiight fate,

Can you set me straight,

Can you show me the way,

Can you tell me your say,

Can you reach for the star,

Can you throw me afar.

 

I just want to hear your voice again,

I just want to know whats going on,

I can't stand to say goodbye once more,

But your leaving just as you said you never would.

 

How can you let me down,

How can you watch me drown,

How can you say goodbye,

How can you watch me cry,

How can you say love,

How can you give my heart another shove,

How can you say those words that you don't mean,

How can you be that evil machine?

 

Will i ever be enough for you,

Will i ever mean so much,

That you will look me in the eye,

When i cry,

Then reach out and give my heart,

That special touch.

 

Do you want me to be a fake,

Do you want me to put my heart at stake,

Do you want me to reach out,

Do you want me to shout about,

Do you want me to cry,

Do you want me to lie,

Do you want me to fight,

Do you want me to be your light?

 

I would change everything for you,

This much you should always know is true,

I would do anything to seem you again,

I would do anything for you,

Even if it drove me insane.

 

I will be everything you want me to be,

I will see everything you want me to see,

I will change my way,

I will keep my pain at bay,

I will fight with all my might,

I will never lose sight,

I will be there from the start,

I will love you again with my whole heart.

 

What do you want me to do,

I can't see through you,

I don't want to give you up,

I can't let you go,

I need you to know,

You are my everything.

 

Now can you look me in the eye,

Now can you tell me why,

Now how can you watch me cry,

Now how can you say goodbye,

Now do you want me to reach out,

Now do you want me to shout it out,

Now i will fight with all my might,

Now i will NEVER lose sight.

 

Will you let me back again?

I miss you,

Do you me miss too?

[girl friend]

Wow. Sounds like you love him more than anything...

Excellent style and beautifully written as usual! Keep it up

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thankyou darl

 

I do love him a whole lot, but he doesn't love me so what can you do but move on and fight some new cute people to chase

[aMisname]

i feel that same way. i wish i could do poetry

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Just write the truth of your heart, thats all it is. It doesn't have to sound good. No one else has to like it as long as it means something to you. Thats what gives me the confidence to post mine. Because even if others do not like it i know it was the best i could do. After all thats all that matters.