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duke nukem

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  1. duke nukem
    This is all good info. But if you're writing solely for your pleasure, then do as you wish obviously. How are you doing OP?
  2. duke nukem
    I think she may have been banned...
  3. duke nukem
    I never said it was, and I know it isn't. But I know that we as people will be stronger when we realize we'll always have us.
  4. duke nukem
    Maybe you're the one to save you. After all, we can only truly rely on ourselves.
  5. duke nukem
    To me it tells of someone who was either cheated on or left for another by their SO, and they are looking for answers. The depression that they face makes life seem unlivable, and they're looking for someone to save them, as the last line states.
  6. duke nukem
    It definitely has a voice. I like it, in a melancholy way. Are you looking for things like structure help or how the idea comes accross?
  7. duke nukem
    No problem.
  8. duke nukem
    Guilt is a terrible feeling, and it's hard to get rid of even for small things. But if there's anything good to say, at least you do feel guilty for your actions. It shows you have a conscience, and no person with that is truly bad.
  9. duke nukem
    It was. Eventually we all have to realize we all make mistakes, and what we need to do to make amends and move on. I'm sure you will do the right thing.
  10. duke nukem
    A tragic story of love lost. You certainly captured your story.
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