musicguy

Thanks I just wrote it spur of the moment

Gazing at the blade so shiny,

easing all the pain from everything,

silence surrounds me,

heavy breathing,

I swipe my skin

and see the red,

the warmth runs down onto my bed.

here I go,

the angels whisper in my ear,

I lay my head down,

say good bye in my own way,

candles burning,

letter written,

sorrows fading,

pain.....gone.

Musicguy©Dec.2007

She leaves me here

tears falling like rain,

wondering what to do or say.

numb,

angry,

and confused.

All the smiles

and all the good times

wash away.

Remembering how you made me feel

is just a fading memory.

She leaves me in the darkness

my heart is left in a mess on the ground

slipping through my hands,

waiting for someone to mend it,

to set it free again.

Musicguy©Dec. 2007

Looking up at blackened skies

bleeding from the wounds

that you left me,

scarred from within,

staring into a broken mirror,

empty thoughts swirling in my head.

The words you said to me,

the way it used to be,

is now just a memory.

The tears I shed,

the blood I've bled,

remembering everything.

Is fading away

burning to ashes

like the pictures of you in my heart.

The words you said to me,

the way it used to be

is now just a memory.

Your love will not be forgotten,

Your shadow disappears,

and lie here in my empty bed,

to fall asleep forever.

Musicguy © Dec 2007

Are you referring to a real person in your poem ?

yup, I'm referring to a real person

The day that I saw you

my heart exploded with happiness.

My arms wrapped around oh so tight

I felt so safe and warm.

Your kisses felt like fireworks

your eyes sparkled when I look at them

I feel your heart beat against mine.

I know this is right.

This love is never ending

in this world of mass destruction,

As everything around us falls,

we're standing strong

with our hands held tight

and our hearts in sync.

Nothing can stop us

our love will never die.

hehe, it's okay

awwww!! thank you. I've been writing poetry since I was in 14

Yup, that's right!

Don't know what to say but WoW.

 

Thanks

Why thank you. What do you think my poem is about?

Screaming inside,

tearing me from within,

shadows lurk behind me.

Nowhere to run,

nowhere to hide.

You left me

torn and shattered,

bruised and battered.

loss of hope or happiness.

wondering who you are now

where did the old you go?

Broken hearted

shattered soul,

but I'll be back,

better than ever,

better than you'll ever be.

The strong survive

musicguy©2007

Very good one....I like reading your poems, MG.

thank you

I look at your picture with tears in my eyes,

wanting to hold you in my arms,

wanting to kiss your lips.

feeling the warmth of your touch.

I miss the feeling of your lips on mine.

I hear your voice inside my head.

wishing that you're here with me.

My heart was sinking when you left me

but hearing you lifts my spirits.

Here I sit writing this for you,

hoping that you'll come here.

back home where you belong.

Musicguy ©Dec2007

I promise to be there for you through thick and thin.

to hold you and comfort you.

I wipe the tears from your eyes

and kiss your sorrows away.

I promise to love you

with every fiber of my being.

to make you smile

to get through the obstacles that

life throws us.

I promise to talk to you in any fight we have,

to show you that I love you

and show you that I care.

Material things don't mean a thing to me

when it comes to you.

but for what we feel for each other

for the love that we share together.

Musicguy ©Nov.2007

Thank you everyone

I look inside her heart and see the beauty she has within

her passion,

her love overflows into my heart.

When I saw her she looked like a goddess.

She's still that way to me now.

When we embrace I feel the energy between us

coursing through our veins like a lightning bolt.

She lifts my spirits every time that I feel blue.

She makes gray clouds disappear,

in her eyes,

where I see inside her soul,

where I see the heavens light.

She wraps her love around me each night

as we fall asleep,

waking up with her by my side

to kiss her forehead and tell her how much

I love being with her.

Musicguy ©Nov. 26-2007

thank you, it's the only way I can write how I feel about things

Pulled from left to right,

emotions in a tangled web,

screaming from within.

Clawing my way out.

Wondering what to do

or where to go.

Is there a light at the end of the tunnel?

A constant reminder of hope,

a stream of happiness in my soul somewhere.

Where do I go from here?

facing my demons,

hiding in the shadows

cowering in fear.

Oh where do I go from here?

I am a collage of emotions,

music is my art,

art is on my skin.

each piece is a story,

a story about me,

it's where I let my feelings go free.

My heart is tender,

my soul is beautiful.

Inside I cry

for a love I'd to find.

For one to hold me,

kiss me,

to be with me.

In my heart I'm missing

the brother I know,

the brother I love,

the one who left me in my early years.

I don't remember his face,

or his voice,

just the constant flow of tears.

As a young man I was torn between two,

who do I see next time,

how long will I stay.

Who do I spend time with on a certain holiday.

I see a figure of a man who I thought I could look up to,

he's just a shadow in the mist,

the one who is half of me,

where is he at?

he's a few miles away,

yet so far from me each day.

There is love that I feel

getting him to understand me is a different deal.

But I still love him.

Then there's the one closest to me

heart and soul,

she's always wanting me to strive for my goal.

She's been there for me since day one,

my greatest love

beyond the heavens above.

She's the greatest person in the world.

Now there is my story,

not in bookstore

or in the paper.

It's right here from my heart

deep within

where my passion lies

and my love for them

never die.

Nov.@2007

I looked into your eyes and told you I love you.

A kiss that lasts forever

I'm in a deep tranquility.

Walking away I turn to you

and see you wipe the tears away.

but I'm on my way accross the seas,

in my heart you'll be there always.

Looking at your pictures with our kids

I hope that my stay isn't too long out here.

Gazing at the stars by the fireside,

Writing letters as I cry.

I want to be home,

right back into your arms.

The sand flies at my face,

guns and bombs around me.

All I can do is think of you and the kids.

Time feels like eternity,

days go by,

the months are slow,

until I'm back with you.

I love you all,

I miss you all,

I'll be home again.

I promise.

thanks everyone

Thanks Sarey, You always make me smile.

 

Music guy getting a comment from you makes me feel so proud because your work is always so expressive.

 

Thank you both

 

you have expressive poetry too

Though the distance is far,

you're always close to me.

I hear your voice dance in my head,

As the wind blows I feel your touch.

When I talk to you my soul is calm.

and my heart races.

I can't wait to get to see you

to wrap my arms around you.

to look into your eyes and tell you how much I love you.

You mean the world to me,

Through thick and thin I'll be there for you.

The miles don't matter,

the distance doesn't matter.

What matters the most is our love for each other.

I love it!! Great poem!

Looking into your eyes

seeing heavenly skies

where I feel safe and warm.

Holding you so close

feeling your heart beat

makes my life complete.

Every time we kiss

I feel your breath giving me more life.

As I sit here, looking at the one I love.

I know that this is true.

Girl, you know you make me happy,

and you take my fears away,

you know that I'll always love you,

forever and a day.

I touch your face so smooth like a porcelain doll,

I can sense your love run through me

when we embrace at night

in the candlelight.

You're the one I love,

you're the one I need,

You're everything.....to me.