musicguy

I want..to touch your face, so smooth like a porcelain doll.

I want..to kiss your lips.

I want..to make you happy again.

to show you how much you mean to me,

and give you my heart,

my soul,

for you to smile

and care free.

I want..to make your heart smile,

I want..to sweep you off of your feet,

cuz close in my heart you are,

safe and warm.

I want..to feel your sweet lips against mine,

I want..to cuddle with you and look into your eyes,

to be there for you through thick and thin.

by your side,

just you and me.

Musicguy© Mar. 2008

=], Allie you are too kind

thanks guys =]

I feel my heart is breakin,

when you let go of me,

the sound of your voice

whispering in my head.

All the things we went through,

baby, all the times we had,

all the love we shared together,

just know that it never dies.

Even though our ways have parted,

in my heart you'll always stay.

The tears we cried just wash away,

the kiss that lasts forever,

our love is never lost.

our love will never die.

Musicguy©Mar. 2008

Girl, lay your head down

close your eyes

as I kiss your lips so sweet.

Your face is smooth as silk.

When I run my fingers through your hair,

it feels like soft velvet against my skin.

I press my lips against yours,

there's the magic,

there's the spark

just like the way it felt from the start.

The warmth of your body

against mine,

your arms wrapped around me,

we dance with passion and ecstasy.

An undying fire,

a love everlasting.

Musicguy© Feb. 2008

Hey MG, I think you should set this to music -- it would make a great song!

 

Nicely done!

 

 

Thanks, I might do that

Wow MG, that was heavy... It's like a black metal love song.

right on!!!

you're very welcome

awww! you're welcome.

When it comes to a poem like this one, it's either something I've remembered from my past love or something I want to feel in a future love

It makes you think, doesn't it?

aww! Allie, what made you speechless about it?

thank you

why does this sound really familiar? i know i've heard/read it before...but good job nonetheless!!

I just thought of it right now

You're quite the romantic, MG. Great poem!

Indeed I am, always have been, always will be

accross a thousands seas,

through the most violent of storms,

I would go the distance,

just to be with you.

When I look into your eyes,

I see the heaven in your soul.

When I kiss your lips, it's out of this world.

a tranquil world, with just you and me in it.

Your love flows from your heart to mine

like a stream of affection, spreading quickly

through out my body.

Your voice soothes my ears

with such sultry words

the way you look at me captivates me

and puts me in a state of euphoria.

Loving you is the most wonderful to happen to me,

loving you each day you see,

In our own world,

as happy as we can be,

Musicguy©Feb. 2008

that's awesome. I'm pretty sure that I'll be here for a long time

Nice job musicguy, you may not know this but, this is my second account on ENA and you gave me great advice when I was younger. Your opinion has always been valued to me

really? Thank you I had no idea that I had an impact on people on here

wow thats really good, i can sort of relate

thanks

The demons within me surfacing,

emptiness overcomes me,

loneliness haunts me everyday,

crying eyes,

bleeding arms,

no one hears me screaming,

no one listens,

no one understands.

I want them to go away.

Musicguy© Feb. 2008

not bad, not bad. I like it

Walk with me,

take my hand

and we'll go on a journey together

with bumps on the road

with twists and turns.

side by side,

through thick and thin.

Walking toward the future,

never looking back.

take my hand,

never let it go,

on this road

as crazy this journey is,

we'll take it day by day.

Just hold on tight

and take my hand.

Musicguy© Feb. 2008

you guys are great

You tell me that you like me,

tell me that you care,

stringing me along,

leading me on,

breakin' my heart each time.

The words you said touched my heart

the words you say now tear me apart,

I'll never understand,

I'll never know why,

it hurts too much,

so here I cry,

even though I can't do it,

I'll just say..........

Good-bye.

Musicguy© Feb. 2008

Bullets surrounding me,

explosions deafening my ears,

Brothers dying,

wiping away my blood, sweat and tears.

Where are they at?

Who's coming after me?

Where are they shooting from?

Am I really free?

Is this my hell,

where I'll lay to die?

The place where all my buddies go,

to fight for freedom

while our significant others cry?

Loading up my chamber,

looking down the line,

scream, aim, fire!

sight to sight,

everything is blood red,

minutes seem like hours.

the heat feels like a fire on my helmet.

the touch of metal is like an oven.

after the smoke clears I sit and look around me,

bodies and blood everywhere,

Am I really in Hell?

Musicguy© Feb. 2007