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Prometheus
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Good flow.
e.
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I thought I'd come so far,
My love.
As easily as we fell into this
I just assumed my mind would do the same;
Fall in love for real and the rest is history.
But it's still here,
Whatever's wrong-
With me, that is.
The higher road, the better road...
It's so much harder
Than just..
Falling down the rabbit hole.
It's seeping in
Slow, some days..
Most, in a breath
Everything's all wrong
And undone.
(1 step forward
3 steps back)
If it could be carved out,
This...
Defective...
I can't find the words.
But I'd say, take it.
Please, take it.
You're the one thing I can't turn my back on.
E.
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I'm re-reading Twilight by Stephanie Meyer.
Great vampire love story.
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So we're left with silences
Empty gaps in these empty conversations
Let's exhange stiff hugs
While all I can think
Is that despite every line we've blurred
I still need you.
It was different when I saw you
Through the misting rain
In a Save-A-Lot parking lot
It was different when I kissed you
This was supposed to be forever
But I'm falling apart
And love has been bled and thrown
Ruined by mistakes and mistrust
Insanity and rumor
We never even got off the ground
And all I can think
Is that despite the oncoming destruction
We were supposed to make it.
You've got the weight of the world
In every kiss you give
You're begging me not to break you
Not you, not this time
You hold on with a desperation
That scares me
You want everything
I'm not a savior
And as you mouth the words to every song
That reminds you of you and me
I'm shaking at the thought
That I just keep breaking
And every time I fall
I'm taking
Another one of you
Down in the wreckage
Down in flames
With me.
So shaking lips
Kiss the metal of the gun
I've got memories of every time I've disappointed
The irony is this'll be
The worst of all
Leaving every one of you behind
With a bloody stain on these summer days...
-Empty.
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Yours is the type of writing I like. The first two lines are my favorite.
-E.
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So I'm playing songs that I know just depress me
And it's a little more, a little more each day
And every day it's like you're further away
Though it's not that many miles between us
And every day over is another day closer...
Your voice on the phone
Makes my heart race
And my words catch in my throat
I'm completely at a loss
And, honestly
I can't concentrate on the conversation
I'm too busy with the fact
That somewhere in the distance
You're holding a phone to your ear
And we have a connection
Other than silent words on paper...
So, here I am again (I'm sure)
Trying to push these incoherent thoughts
Into a line that's close enough to a sentence
Trying to ignore the fact that all I have right now
Is a razorblade and medication,
Wrinkled pictures and a stack of your letters.
-E.
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Your eyes are full
Like I'm something to behold
You're shy, hiding underneath long lashes
Ever the beautiful optimist
Even when we're stuck walking in the hail
And you kiss
Like...
Every time's going to be the last time
And you just have to make it last,
Make it perfect
And I'm just totally, completely
Wrapped up in you.
(Ha. This is a horrible, horrible poem. I just can't find the words for this boy, I can't put him into writing.)
-E.
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I like the flow of this writing.
-E.
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I've been wanting to make a post about Stitches, but I can't yet because I still have a post on the main page...I'm the girl he was talking about, the online relationship one...Stitches hasn't been online in a very long time compared to how often he gets online. I really hope someone here talks to him in person and can put my fears to rest. I've been very worried and trying to not mention it, but it's getting to be too long....I'm going to post a thread as soon as I can.
-E.
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The pain spirals slowly upward
Toward the ceiling
As the day fades to grey
Pictures on the wall portray
The shallow friendships and rock star crushes
While your cd plays in the next room
Your clothes are folded, lifeless in the chair
And the smell of you clings to my sheets
The weight of the day without you
Unbearable to the point of breaking
The smell of drugs
And alcohol
Cigarettes and
The stench of addiction
I'm better than this
When I'm with you
But you're not here
And their hands are wandering
Despite everything I've said
They don't care
These words mean nothing
On and on until it's finally through
I'm a dirty reflection in a mirror
Tear stained face
Naked and broken and bruised
I can't stop the sobs
My hands are shaking...
*I don't know how to finish this poem. I can't think of an ending. I wanted it to end on a hopeful note, but then the seconds half of the poem came in my head and the hopeful note is shot.*
-E.
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Good job. It makes you want to read more.
-E.
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I'll try to summarize things and keep this short.
I'm a junior in high school and I've been suspended for 10 days because I was high (on xanax) at school. I have 7 classes and I was already failing 2 of them, 2 others were D's. When I get back to school because of the 10 days gone I will surely be failing every class.
Honestly, because of my depression and everything else wrong with me, going on with me, I just really don't see myself having the motivation to be able to get all my grades up after this. And come back next year for my senior year on top of everything.
I'm trying to stay rational and at least keep in mind that despite the pointlessness of school in the great scheme of things, I need to graduate or get my ged to be able to support myself in the future.
If I want to go take my ged, how long will it take to get it? How hard is it? I'm wanting advice from people who have got their ged, explain the details of it to me, your experience with it, etc.
I've written before about my drug use, depression, etc. Please spare me the lectures on that at the moment, I already have people trying to help me as far as that goes. I just need advice about my education.
Thanks.
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I understand where you're coming from, I have anxiety and panic attacks among other things. I advise you to keep taking meds because of how serious your panic attacks are, but you will probably have to switch meds a few times to get the right one. It usually doesn't work out right the first time, it takes a little bit to find what works for you, the right kind and the right dose and for it to build up in your system. Don't give up. You're not the only one.
-E.
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Self-manipulation to control people is selfish and cruel. It plays with peoples emotions, the people who care. It's not right. I self-injure and people who do it to get their way make it that much harder for people to understand the addiction. I guess I can understand the desperation, she knows that if she cuts she will get your attention, get you to come to her, but it's not fair to you or anyone else.
-E.
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I'm not even here enough to write well anymore. I tried.
Shattered.
Just enough pieces left to wreak havock
On the fragile skin.
So this is where the breakdown begins.
Ends.
Incoherency in the remnants of a high.
Memories not enough to save a life
This time.
Traces of your dirty fingers burn
Right through me.
Did the words taste bitter on your tongue?
I can't take back a single time
I swallowed your lies.
I gave the lowest expectations
And not a single one of you
Could even reach that high.
And I'm a failure in the face of the ones that cared.
You've all failed me and I've failed them.
No matter how high, we're still not the same.
I take what you've bought
You take what I am.
In the end you've gained everything.
I'm left with your empty words and a life I can't stand to live.
So in exchange for every time you had me,
And every lie I depended on
Give me enough not to make it out alive.
-E.
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Yes, all of those things are most definitly happening. Even moreso when drugs and alcohol are envolved. Well I know they're all happening, except for the teenager/older woman thing, I'm not sure about that one, but it probably happens too.
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Thanks so much for replying. This is the first piece of writing I've really gotten out on this subject. I'm glad you guys liked it.
-E.
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You're all bones
Cigarette in between long fingers
Legs tucked beneath the glass coffee table.
Sunlight shines through the sliding door
Making visible the swirling smoke
You exhale into the room.
You're all smile
Half a day going by
Playing on the couch
Laughing
You made it more every time, you did.
We're a tangle of legs in the bed
Your heartbeat worrying me
Not sounding healthy, even in sleep.
I watch red numbers go by
You wrapped tight around me
Breathe in, breathe out
We're so young
And I'm still wishing we could live forever.
I know in the morning I'll smell like you.
Your voice no longer soft
Admitting, quietly, that you can't wait to see me.
You're calm, and cold, and sure.
Blank
On the other side of the room.
I shift restlessly
Used to your hand in my hair
Your lips on my forehead
You next to me on the couch
So I put my hands in my lap and wait.
You tell me, let's go
And your eyes are empty, before and after.
I get dressed with numb hands, and for the first time with you
I hate myself.
You made it more.
In all the weeks,
In all the phone calls, in all the plans
And things you did and said.
Every time you say, I'm sorry
Every time I say, It's okay
We're both lying.
-E.
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So let's discuss
What we used to be
And what we could have been
Make this as painful as possible
I know that's what you're aiming for
And every complaint
I ever had
Is out the window
It's useless and you think apologies
And plans for change
Solve everything
So tell me how I'm so
****ing unforgiving
While I wonder if you ever really say what you mean
Do you ever, ever mean what you say?
Every time you touch me
Things go wrong.
-E.
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"Sometimes it's hard to know what's real when you're not. 'Cause you know I change myself to impress whoever happens to be next to me..." -Armor For Sleep
I'm just a lie
Wrapped in whatever you want me to be
Tell me how you like me
How you want me
What you need
It really doesn't matter
Not now
I'm all cleaned up when you find me
But you'll still see the scars
So are you ready?
Don't ask for truth
I'll give you what I can
How can I be anything but a fake
When there's nothing left of me?
-I'm a ghost of your hopes and dreams.
-E.
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I'm not going to commit suicide, as long as I'm writing it's okay...
-E.
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I hear the song
I associate with suicide
I knew it'd trigger me
But I play it anyway
Just to have some feeling
So slit my throat and call me a fake
I want to be done
I just can't function anymore
I'm so da** tired of breaking
They told lies when I needed them most
I'm dying for truth when it'll kill me
(The pills were to kill yesterday
The alcohol to kill tomorrow.)
("Car Underwater" by Armor For Sleep: link removed )
-E.
The young lady from Lynn
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haha nice like it