tears_fall_invisibly

That was a really great poem, with a lot of meaning, its a shame that we cant understand spoken words (as silly as that sounds). Still, i enjoyed the poem. great work!

tears

A friend wanted me to post this for her, shes going through a bit of a rough time at the min .. i dont want to judge so .. sharing it for her. thanks.. as far as i know its called "knocking on the coffin"

knock on the coffin

run your fingers accross the words

feel the death beneath it

the crows and the birds

take a glimse at my corpse

hear my heart roar

let me have a look at the devil

now open up your doors

you stabbed me through the heart

slashed me accross the face

you punched me till hell rose

"kelly what a disgrace"

you rose up your first

and punched down hard

but the cowardess thing is

i was always off guard

you preyed on my weakness

"get off" on it you could say

but the sad thing was you soon began to pay

i crept up on you

learning from example

snook into your room

learning from example

took a pillow of your bed

learning from your example

and wept as i did

learning from example

i pushed the pillow down hard

learning from example

held it accross your face

learning from example

i laughed as your struggled

oh look what you have taught

i laughed as your body twhiched

only i wasnt distruaght

i could feel you take your last breath

so breeth it in deep

think of all the pain ...

youve inflicted on me

now look into the darkness

dont be afraid

after all

this was the life you made

thanks

Hey

i really liked your poem, i thought it had depth, i believe your right when you say that we arent the same, i dont feel that anyone is, i never like to compare, i mean each person takes differently to say love, or death or experiances. i think that we all grow, and some experiance similar passings but never do we have the same experiance, emotion and devotion.

i loved it.

i guess this is what im feeling at the minute so i will dedicate this short poem to you:

UNTITLED:

looking into your eyes

brings only surprise

to find not a man

but a small child inside

the look is distinct

the tears are near

an eternity of life, past, living

you fear!

for what have you experianced?

what have you gained

nothing but anothers life

as you follow down the lane

no one is identicle

not even the twins

for no one has the same game

thereforeeeth no one wins

life may be a battle

but forth it shall go

as nothing can be gained

if you dont have highs and lows

you may not want to go alone

and nor shall you be

but there are things in life

that only your eyes can see

you have your own ambition

you have your own dreams

for everything you experiance

just isnt all that it seems!

i hope you like it, and may these good times come strong for you! if you think, you know who i am

tears_fall_invisibly x

Hey everyone,

i have a question that seems simple on the surface, and even i had my answers to it, but looking at the angle of ''if it was me'' or the true severity puts it into a different perspective, ive got a boyfriend, and he isnt young so its more of a mature answer im looking for, but how can i help him cope through his parents divorce?

His parents are great friends still and that has given a greater shock due to it being so unexpected, his father is moving out today and both him and his sister were only told three days ago, how do i help him cope?

My boyfriend isnt used to opening up and has only done so recenetly to me, with me being the only person he speaks to, he seems to feel he has to set a positive and good role model for his younger 14 year old sister, he has been teaching professional guitar for a while and puts his emotion into his work, even though this is one way of relief i dont think he is actually gaining enough help from it.

thankyou for any responce,

Jx

i love my boyfrend because he is who he wants to be.

i love him because he wants to become his own not someone elses.

i love him because he expresses the way he feels.

i love his creativity.

i love the way he makes me feel.

i love him for who is.

tears_fall_invisibly

i really liked the both of your poems, why is it that there is a constant battle between your mum and step mum?

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do men really enjoy watching their girls touch themselves? and do you mind a girl pointing out or guiding you at any point?

thanks, tears_fall_invisibly

thanks you guys, i read the advice as soon as you posted but forgot to respond, but i guess its better because the good news is that i have worked things out and i really appreicate the help from you guys, thankyou.

tears_fall_invisibly

hey.

i dont want people round here to take this the wrong way its only aimed at people whos in my social group, just like some advice.

right frankly i feel that a person should have priorities as to where people stand in their lives, in the sense that, maybe a boyfriend could stand a side one time so that friends could go out, i mean its alright for the entire to be together only some peoploe exclude themselves when with a partner and makes others feel awkward.

anyhow i have a social group at the minute where my mate has gone out with this guy through spite when he has liked her for a very long time period, she competes twenty four seven by doing different sexual things with him and i think that this is awful because what she feels for him is mediocre to what he feels for her yet with this infactuation he doesnt see through the pain.

its odd though because to say she was such an empowering person before she brings the group down now, she makes others feel unwelcome and never spends time with the right people at the right time, i know you shoudlnt put a date and timt to things but theres moments where you need friends to be around you and its obvious, can you see what im saying?

so i guess my point is that this friend really does affect the friendships of others, she no longer that person you want to be around but more so someone you would avoid,she is now very stereotypical yet predictable at the same time.

she seems to be very homophobic and this was never her, and a guy mate of mine seems very much under pressure by constant comments she makes.

she has always said and commented on what she hatres but how do you tell this person that they are what they once hated?

i could really do with some help on this one, its come to the point where people avoid being with her because shes pushed them away and now they retaliate, we know who she was, should we accept what she has become, the ignorance she has in her?

thanks for the help guys,

tears_fall_invisibly

i really enjoyed your poem, maybe you could put some more stuff up as you do it.

tears_fall_invisibly

i dont know if you can ever truly tell its and own opinion, its like the way i attempt in describing love would be so different to anothers views, so is there a deffinition off love? or maybe the deffintion is that that it is indefinable other than this, that the world was blessed with so many views that we experiance it in our own ways, that for some reason our heart maybe tells us or even our mind, maybe one day we turn around and see the beauty in a relationship, you know?

well i dont know the answer to your question but thats my attempt for you.

tears_fall_invisibly

its understandable that your embaressed, i guess it depends upon the age, sometimes if your pretty young its not even necessary about telling parents because its not often seen as something too serious, however if you do really like this girl, then be open and tell your parents exactly what it is that you feel and whats happening.

i guess honesty is the best policy with this one, there is nothing to be ashamed of, you know?

tears_fall_invisibly

i thnk i would have to go with ''thankyou'' its a pretty powerful song and although i cant remember the name of the artist, it is quite recent. its the power we gain from even the negatives in life and how we live on.

i like it anyway.

tears_fall_invisibly

no theres nothing wrong, and it isnt harmful, not at that extent unless its done excessively 24 hours a day i think the only risks you get then is a loss of social life, but ever day is no harm

tears_fall_invisibly

thanks pip, i can see why you thought it was a tough question, it has many layers, thats why i sometimes feel that its difficult to speak to people without the wrong intent, thanks for the idea though, only it comes a time when you cant use than any more, its not that i have a problem with how i phrase things just maybe the words i use have so much potential, you know?

anyway thanks for the help, and i know the ropes around here but thanks for the tip.

tears_fall_invisibly

hey everyone, im a little bit of a newbie with a twist

but i was wondering how can i espress my emotions without fearing them? i mean half the time i worry about how others will react knowing how i feel and if they took it the way its intended, i know they can be mixed deffinitions as to what words mean, so how do you know if that conclusion made by others was the one that was accurate?

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hey, i really liked your poem, i think freestyle work alot better than planning sometimes its like a flow of emotions that arent forced but natural.i liked it anyway.

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