EmptySoul Posted September 16, 2003 Share Posted September 16, 2003 hello everyone. this poem goes out to everyone i know and love... i hide everything with a simple smile oh, the things that no one knows try on my shoes, yeah, walk a mile see how far your insulting goes you bring me up, you bring me down i live for your approval i'm just a copy of your smile, your frown waiting for your love...or your removal i give as much trust as i have left but the doubts echo in my mind every time we take a step back i see opprotunities i left behind you could lie to me and i wont care it's the attention that keeps me breathing the truth doesn't even matter anymore whether it's truly love... or just deceiving EmptySoul Link to comment
Finzsoftie Posted September 16, 2003 Share Posted September 16, 2003 Thanks for that, have you got any others? can you PM me that poem please! Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted September 16, 2003 Share Posted September 16, 2003 hey that was a great poem really heart felt, at times i feel like that when you dont know whats false and who to impress. i miss so many hurdles in life that i want to conquer but just miss them by taking an easy pass. i guess we all want to take a step back for another chance. anyway great poem. kel Link to comment
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