swtangel980 Posted September 15, 2003 Share Posted September 15, 2003 When your brain keeps racing And it just doesn't quit When you can't run around and you just can't sit How do you keep yourself busy When you don't want to think Whenever you don't want to feel When you can't find the link WHenever you want to make yourself believe What isnt the truth at all when you want to help yourself And all you know is you dont want to fall When you know the truth But you dont want it to be When you close your eyes But all you can do is see When you shut your eyes Close them so tight When your heart knows But your up for the fight Believe your Brain But follow your heart Because your brain is stupid But your heart is always smart! Link to comment
Gunther Posted September 15, 2003 Share Posted September 15, 2003 *applauds* good poem, does it relate to your life somehow? LoL just thought I'd ask. Link to comment
swtangel980 Posted September 15, 2003 Author Share Posted September 15, 2003 thank you, Yeah it does apply to my life how? im no so sure yet..i just picked up a pen and it got put onto the paper and by the end i didnt know it but i wrote sumething inside me. thanks for ur input Link to comment
Anamarie89 Posted September 15, 2003 Share Posted September 15, 2003 i like that a lot! good show the last verse is a little weird, but other than that, it is an uplifting, fun poem. Link to comment
just_smile Posted September 19, 2003 Share Posted September 19, 2003 hey, Intriguing poem, i liked it, im kinda like you when writing a peom, i just sit there, think and write and before i know it i have writen a poem which has come from the heart but out of now where at the same time. anyway thanks for sharing your poem and keep writing id like to here more ~ LJ Link to comment
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