skyshroudterror Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 What I'm lost with out. I feel lonely out in the world today, I feel this way everyday. I never used to wonder why, But the one excuse I have, I'd say it's a lie. I'll tell you what it is, It's something I very truly miss. I miss having a girl, A girl worth a million pearls. I know she's out there, Somewhere close, or far from here. And I will find her, today, tomorrow, or in a few years. I may have found her already, but speaking her name I fear. But I know there's more out there, Waiting for me to love and care. Even if she is on the other side of the moon, I'll meet her someday, somewhere, and I'll love her through and through. _____________________________________________________________ Im no poem writer.. so it can be way better.. but im pretty sure thats the best I can do..... Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 That is really good I like it, its all about expressin yourself, keep at it. Practise makes perfect. Link to comment
dude123 Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Wow great poem keep up the great work. Link to comment
Kitsy Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 WOW! that was really good- very nice, good job! Link to comment
skyshroudterror Posted July 10, 2003 Author Share Posted July 10, 2003 Thanks for all of your wonderful replies... I really do thank you... I thought the poem was my best one I ever wrote.. and my friend Jeremy said it sucked.. so I had to get some other opinions.. thanks alot... Link to comment
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