Its Hard To Say Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 Rain She sits at her window watching the rain fall from the sky Listening to the thunder crash as tears pour from her eyes She waits for the rain now So she can wander outside hiding from the others as she starts to cry She can't stand life now Try as she might It seems she can't last She'll end this tonight Her dark room, shadowed Her floor cold and bare She's so sure now That they'll never care Hoping she'll succeed in her attempt she slits her wrists and waits quietly Watching the blood pour smiling as it bleeds She sits at her widow watching the rain fall from the sky watching the lightning flash as she slowly starts to die Yeah... so tell me what you guys think of it. Link to comment
QTpie87 Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 I really like it, I think it's sad though, it made me sad, but hey poems are suppost to make the reader feel an emotion, so good work. great poem, keep on writing. Qtpie87 Link to comment
From_Now_On Posted June 28, 2005 Share Posted June 28, 2005 Very good. Very sad. I love the title. I love all of it. Keep writing...and take care. Link to comment
Its Hard To Say Posted June 28, 2005 Author Share Posted June 28, 2005 Hey thanks guys. I didn't think anyone would like this! And I know. It is sad But I wasn't in a very good mood. I'm still not... anyway thanks again! Link to comment
From_Now_On Posted June 29, 2005 Share Posted June 29, 2005 Hey thanks guys. I didn't think anyone would like this! And I know. It is sad But I wasn't in a very good mood. I'm still not... anyway thanks again! Well, I liked it a lot. And I hope you feel better soon. If ya ever need an ear (or well, pair of eyes)...feel free to PM me. Take care. -FNO Link to comment
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