digital fiction Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 Like a rag doll Pull me up, rattle me 'round Chuck me away, I'll hit the ground Now wipe my blood through your hair Show small signs that you dont care Yeah, punch me left, punch me right And kick me 'till I cant see light, light Rap me 'round some knives once more And dump me 'gainst devils door, door Like a rag doll I, I fall to the mud again, again Like a rag doll, throw me 'til I descend You shoot me once, 'n shoot me twice Gamble me 'round like I'm .L.A. dice Yeah, Now I'm torn and now ripped 'N now I'm in blood; dripped, dripped Cause I cant see out of these eyes 'N now theyre lying near your lies, lies Why oh why? Because I'm like a rag doll I've no heart to breathe; No place to be I have no mouth to talk, no eyes to see Because I'm like a rag doll Like a rag doll Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 Very interesting ,Keep writing! Link to comment
digital fiction Posted February 9, 2005 Author Share Posted February 9, 2005 Thank you so much Ang3l! I appreciate the feedback. Link to comment
Deeplydepressed Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 Wow! If you don't mind me asking is there a story behind this poem? Otherwise I enjoyed your poem alot. Link to comment
digital fiction Posted February 9, 2005 Author Share Posted February 9, 2005 Thanks guys. Deeply - I'm not too sure whether there was an exact story behind it. But I guess it tells a story of a person who is followed everywhere, who feels like he's all alone and so on. Its through the eyes of a lonely person I guess. Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted February 10, 2005 Share Posted February 10, 2005 Good job. I like it. Empty Link to comment
digital fiction Posted February 10, 2005 Author Share Posted February 10, 2005 Thank you Empty! Link to comment
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