ForAnother Posted January 6, 2005 Share Posted January 6, 2005 Days they keep on churning your mind. They keep you alive they keep your wanting and hoping for more. Learn and you will see the end of me. These days, of waking and slaving away for nothing. Become important for the powerless for the useless. Learn from me and you will see every day is pointless. Ball up and die. Link to comment
Jimbo10 Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 THat's a kinda sad outlook on our day to day lives. I'm not saying it's not beatiful, i just hope you don't really think every day is pointless! Link to comment
digital fiction Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 That poems great! Its very unique, descriptive and talented. Well done! Link to comment
ForAnother Posted January 8, 2005 Author Share Posted January 8, 2005 Heh, Nah I don't really think each day is pointless... just some days I just thoguht takin it to the extreme would be more interestinhg I suppose. Thanks for your comments ForAnother Link to comment
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