ForAnother Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 The Backseat I put my feet down on the ground, rummaging through the mess to place them. Comfortable I sat back enjoyed the ride. The bass pounding wrecking havoc on my back. Boom boom I go. Eyes closed window opened hair flying everything felt right. Foot tapping with every beat. Slowly I opened my eyes again. I saw it outside, the lights. Single bulbs of light that slowly mended and began to stream accross the dark. Houses blurred into a wall and lines of the road, lead me to places. But, the one thing that calmed my sanity was the bass. It boomed and it roared me a lullaby. And out I went, once again. ForAnother Link to comment
armasiel Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 Hehehe. That almost perfectly describes by best friend's car, except for the good stereo! lol. A nice piece. Sometimes the happiest place on Earth is riding in a car at night, good music, good friends, and all your cares just seem to melt away in a flurry of beats and booze! good job. Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 *sigh* Riding in a car, at night...my favorite thing to do. You see all these poems about love and death but none about riding in a car at night. I'm not saying that I don't like poems about love or death, I do. But I like your poems, because they are unique. Your number 1 fan, under* Link to comment
ForAnother Posted November 6, 2004 Author Share Posted November 6, 2004 Thank you guys. I appreciate it. #1 m'lady... #1 ForAnother Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 Unique. Good. Empty Link to comment
ForAnother Posted November 10, 2004 Author Share Posted November 10, 2004 Thank you ForAnother Link to comment
Delaurence23 Posted November 12, 2004 Share Posted November 12, 2004 great poem music will calm anything keep writing you will be great Link to comment
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