mystery Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 what do you guys think? at the end...im not really gonna kill myself....its a poem that i wrote as if i was in one of my friends head....long story. running away if i didnt show up tomorrow would you care would you even notice am i a puzzle pieve to your every day only noticed when i go away a hole in the background where nothing else will fit in im not essential for the picture to be visible a minor detail something that can be easily forgotten so should i show myself and have no one see me or should i stay hidden become forgotten make you wonder if i was there at all pay attention to the person behind the smile for once you might realize who i am blood and tears running down my cheek through my heart are what you all have made me into this sad regret a symbol of a long lost love i will say goodbye you have one last chance one last test to let me know if you care to prove to me if i should really still be here for i will raise a gun to my head and end it all if not a single world like no isnt said. Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 Very deep, I like it...alot. under* Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 Well... I hope it didn't came from your heart because... if you really want to kill yourself... umm... Good poem! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 Very deep poem.i loved it. ~meagan~ Link to comment
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