Gauchori Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 People. This are my 3 poems that I have posted these past days. If didn't got the chance to read them all. Well... here that are in one big poem. They were all actually separated poems, but I puted them together because they tell and express the same thing and felling for the same person. And I don't know when I'm going to post Part 4 but... I hope its soon. Thanks for your attention so far, and thanks for suporting me in every way 8) Poem- I'm in love with her but she does not know it. I'm in love with a girl. She is like a pearl. I love her some much, But all I can do is watch. Watch how she passes in front of me. Watch how she passes by. Without a saying word, I feel the pain, deep inside. I write about her in my every poem, I see her in my every dream. I always think about her, This is extreme! I can see her face, I can see her smile. I just want to be with her but… How? I am just too shy, Even though I try. I don't want to say a word, Because I'll look like a nerd! What can I do? To take this pain from me. There is nothing I can do, Because now its part of me. She is going away. She is moving on. I feel destroy, And at the same time, full of joy. I wish her good. And all the happiness she could have. But what am I? I'm just shy… Sometimes I look at the sky, And see myself as just a guy. Sometimes I cry, But I just can't say good-bye. I wished she had noticed me, And knew how much I loved her. But time has passed… So, so fast. Time has come again, To overcome my fear. Am I really doing this? Is this for real? I can't talk to her, I'm too shy. I can't do it! I'm just a guy. Should I just walk up to her? And tell her how I feel? NO! I can't do it! To her, I'm no big deal. I remember the good times we had together, How good I felt. But time has passed by, And I'm… not felling well. I am sick, But not for health. I'm love sick, Because of her. There's no doctor, no therapy, To take away the pain. I'm so stupid, I'm so lame. Now I ask myself, Why did I let her go? There is no answer, no solution. She is gone. I can still see her, See her smile. I'm crazy! I'm full of desire. What is going to happened to me? Am I going to die? All I can ask, Is when and why. Why do I have to be so shy? Why do I close the doors? Why can't I just tell her… "All my heart is yours" Her picture is like my conscience, Always popping up in my face. And when this happens, I can't stay in the same place. I have to walk around. I try to forget. But in the end, I wished she was a person I had never met. I remember when she looked in my eyes. Now I feel so much pain. What is happening to me? That is something unexplained. I wished I had told you how I felt. All the love I ever gave. Now all that is buried, Deep down in a grave. It is buried because I will never have a chance with you again. I was never brave. I was never great. And now I feel like a slave. I feel like I could never love again. I feel like I could never be me again. I know this is not right, But did you ever give me a chance? How can I love? If I'm not loved? How can I tell you, That you were my beloved? Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 Well,i have read the poems.In my opinion,i think you should keep them separated.When you put all of them together,it sounds fine.But when they are separated they flow better.But,i liked all the poems. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 10, 2004 Author Share Posted September 10, 2004 OH ok. Umm.... thanks Link to comment
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