under_the_pressure Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I wrote this in 4th hour today, it's short and not the greatest by any means but I felt like putting it in the forum. Comments are appreciated. Oh, and it's untitled...I don't have any ideas...if you got any names for a title let me know. the tears have fallen the knife has been put down my wounds have healed he took the pain away from me and made me smile again i no longer hurt... thanks. Link to comment
tiffany82 Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 It's nicely written and positive. I like it Link to comment
Protex Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I like it. I don't have any ideas for a title though. Link to comment
CarterJonas Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I like your poem too! As for a title, what about something like 'a new beginning'. What do you think? Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 well i think that was a good poem.short and sweet.as for titles i really dont know. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 4, 2004 Author Share Posted September 4, 2004 Hey, thanks for the replies. CarterJonas I like that for a title... thanks again everyone! under* Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 i loved it you are really good . hardcoe Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 8, 2004 Author Share Posted September 8, 2004 hey thanks hardcore!! that meant alot to me. hugs* under* Link to comment
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