EmptySoul Posted July 13, 2004 Share Posted July 13, 2004 (written july 11th) sharpened blade as useless now as a plastic spoon. she is the only thing that saves. her presense banishes all that is killing me. NO. it pauses, hides while she is near. and every time in between it grows, it swallows me. it finds my pain and magnifies it. it posions my body, mind and soul condemning me to insanity. -EmptySoul Link to comment
just_smile Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 hey i really liked your poem i thought it was really deep and meaningful. very interesting keep writing ~LJ=; Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 Great poem EmptySoul! Shows some really deep emotions!!! Keep up the good writing! Hubman 8) Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 25, 2004 Share Posted July 25, 2004 Wonderful poem.I t is full of emotion and leaves a mark.Keep writing you have talent Meagan Link to comment
boredguy Posted July 25, 2004 Share Posted July 25, 2004 awesome poem Emptysoul! its deep, yet sad. you're a real wielder of the words! Link to comment
jaiva Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Continue to write about your hurt and your emptyness. You're poem is insightful and meaningful. I liked it and thanks for sharing it. Jaiva Link to comment
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