EmptySoul Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 the air in my face feels so good see the sidewalk drawing near you'll all forget me as the crazy one ThIS is my dying year memories fill my head right now as my blood pools on the ground wondering about what i always searched for- that something i never found you all screamed wh_re and psycho joked about the cuts on my skin you all came back for me later to taste my body again for those of you who "loved" me who'll reach and scream for me in the dark i'm sorry to cause your tears to fall i'm sorry to break your heart please remember how you made me laugh those times you made me smile and every time you're lonely remember- we'll be together in a little while... EmptySoul Link to comment
tainted_soul Posted June 9, 2004 Share Posted June 9, 2004 i wish you would step back from that ledge, my friend... i like it, i can relate to the feelings it expresses, the searching for something you'll never find and also because it's different, it rages against the unjust while at the same time thanking those that were there and remembering happier moments in time, and i love the way it ends with a little hint of dare and dark humor that's enough to make a lot of people take a wide-eyed step back. it's unique and well-done, and it draws you in, very powerful imagery. excellent. Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 9, 2004 Share Posted June 9, 2004 Empty-that was great. I always told you no matter what happens I will always love you. I wish we never faded. ~Under~ Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 13, 2004 Author Share Posted June 13, 2004 tainted_soul, i love your writing bc of its dark humor and difference from the normal flow of writing, so it is a great compliment that you like some of mine. thank you... under_the_pressure, i'll always care about you, i don't think that could change even if i wanted it to. god, i wish we'd never faded too. it's just another thing that hurts every goddamn day. i wish nothing had ever faded, but everything has... EmptySoul Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 13, 2004 Share Posted June 13, 2004 Empty-I didn't think you felt that way. I thought I was still holding on to something that wasn't there. I was listening to "Faint" the other day and was thinking about you, well us. We had so much fun those late nights and I know there is still something between us. We should search for it. Jeez, I sound like we are dating..lol. I miss you, alot. I miss talking to you, because really...you are the only one who understands me. ~Under~ Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 Under, thanks. Actually the line about us sounding like we're dating made me laugh. I want to be honest with you, so i need to talk to you about Jake if you want to hear it, if you don't want it to be your buisiness thats okay. PM me or talk to me on msn if you want to talk. EmptySoul Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 Hey, I need to talk to you, about many things. If you want to listen that is. You know my phone number, you can call me anytime. Or pm me on here or msn. I miss you. We definitely need to talk!! ~Under~ Link to comment
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