tainted_soul Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 puppy dogs get shaved by the blind man with razor scars they bleed from the inside they get in the plastic bag to die all over the sidewalk fragile petals flounder in the wind throwing up on the baby in the stroller to hold one, dying, in your hand sharp needles go too deep merging with the backdrop bruised and shattered the woman walks alone the children cry in the night for the lost souls the darkness keeps pay them no heed the end is coming the end is coming the end is coming Link to comment
Frodo Baggins Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 Damn good poem there, love the imagery. It's the sort of poem that dares you to read it and go further. And if you have a dark sense of humor, it's hilarious AND you can see the point behind it. It's definitely awesome, especially how it practically spits in the face of every poetic cliche we know of. It's starkly original and very unique to the poet. Good job, man. Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 It's dark and it's different. I'm coming to realize that I just love your unique style of writing. EmptySoul Link to comment
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